The Last Days of School...

It is the last days of school and class's are playing outdoor games, cleaing up, moving tables and finishing work. Lucky we get to play outdoor  games as well. Most of the schools in our area have already finished school but we finish on the 19th. I have really enjoyed school and learning about different things.

Our school is going to change. Classes are getting busted down and rebuilt in a diffident places as well as new class are getting built. It will probably end in the middle of 2014. I'm really existed.

Farming Rap

Alright lads

I’m one of the people who have heard the farm rap

And I to live to tell the tail

And this is what he said

Farmers clear trees just to make more money

But in some trees, bees like to make honey

Farmers get some water by draining out the land

But bugs like worms can’t stand dry land

Fertilising plants is what farmers do

But some runs to rivers and makes it blue

So farmers, farmers stop think and do

Cause if you don’t I will call the crew

My Netbook Reflection 2013

My literacy teacher Mr Marks has tort me a lot of things like how to plan my writing. I've been reading a book at home about hurricanes and I've learnt that hurricanes usually form when the surface of the sea is warm, this is called hurricane season. This year my friends have supported me a lot and I'm very grateful. They have tort me a lot of things. I think having a netbook and being able to working online his helped me because now I can do my work at school and at home. This year having a netbook connected to the internet has helped me find out new things from google. Did you know there are no polar bears in Antarctica, I found that out from google.

Stained Glass Window

From Grass to Glass

This is my movie about how we get milk. I hope you enjoy it.

Camp Bentzon

This is what we did at camp. This some of the things we did at camp

my Pet mouse

On October the 10 it was my birthday and I got a Pet mouse. His name is whitney, mainly because he is white. At night he loves to run on his wheel I don’t know why. I was really carefully went every I hold him because I knew that if he runs out of my hand then I would be in big trouble because my mum hates mice. My mum didn’t want me to get him but it was my birthday. He is not even 1 years old yet and luckily he doesn't bite.

We got him from the bishop our church because his daughter owned lots of mice so they asked us if we wanted one and we said yes. He likes eating seeds, weet bix and peanut butter. He use to say in my room with my other pet budgie but it then began to get hard to breathe because of him and it got harder to clear up, so now they both stays in the garage.

Solving Question 1

The Whisper

“A forest” John said looking at a forest. John was exploring his dad’s farm when he saw  a large forest near by. John always got into a lot of trouble. John slowly walked into the forest and there was just lots of trees. So he went deeper into the forest.

He loved exploring places so he was not very scared even though he was just 9 years old. He keep walking and walking when he said to himself, “I think I should go back” but when he turned around he realised that he was lost in the forest. “Help, help, is anyone there”he called. He carried on calling help for about 1 minute, but finally he stopped.

He sat down and started crying. As the sun set and the moon rose John fell asleep. In the morning John was hungry. Luckily John loved watching Man Vs Wild so he sort of knew how to survive. On one of the episodes, the man finds huhu grubs, so he got up and began looking for huhu grubs. He ran to a tree and ripped a long piece of bark and there in the tree were some huhu grubs.

John began eating them. He managed to eat all of it. When he finished he hear someone calling his name saying, “John, John” John recognized that voice, it was his grandma. “Grama, is that you, were are you”John replied. “You can‘t see me but follow the sound of my voice” John’s grandma whispered. John’s grandma had died because she had a heart attack. John followed her voice. It lead him back to the farm. “Thank you grandma, I love you” John said. “Just remember, I will always look out for you, no matter what” She replied. The End

Every picture tells a story

Boom. “That didn't work” said a scientist. Far far away on a very big farm, there lived a scientist who makes special liquid that can change things. When he has tasted it and if it works he gives it to the CSL(Caretaker of Special Liquids) and they give him money. He lived alone and was 69 years old. The scientist was also a farmer who loved his crops with all his heart. But one day went the sun came out he went outside to take a look at his crops but they were dying!.

“Why are my crops dying!, I water them everyday and give them plenty of sunlight and fresh air I just don’t understand” He said very worried. He rushed to his lab and began making something that would save his cops. He did some test on his crops and figured out things like how long does it have left until it dies. “I just need one more thing, the enactment rock to complete it and save my crops, it looks like I’m going to Hawaii ”He said excited. The scientist always wanted to go to Hawaii but just did not have a reason why but since his crops were dying he had to go

He grabbed his bag and hopped into his transport machine and teleported to Hawaii. Once he got there it was very hot so. He reach into his bag and pulled out he’s special GPS and tipped in the Enactment Rock. It lead him through bushes and trees. Everything was going just right when. “Oh no, a lion” He whispered.

He checked his bag and luckily found one of his speichel liquids. The speichel liquid could turn him into a lion. So he drunk it. He turned into a lion for sure, but a female Lion. He knew the male Lion would be attracted to him so he try to sneak past. On the way the Lion female but accidentally stepped on a stick. “Whos there, well hello beautiful where are you off to” the male Lion said.

“Oh I’m just going” The female lion(the scientist) said nervously. “Don’t go just yet, I just meet you, why don’t you stay so we can play, you know” the male Lion said. “I will rather eat poo then play with you, so get lost you ugly old man” The Female Lion said running of. “That was close” the female lion said.

30 mines of walking later the special liquid weared off so now he was back to himself. The sun had set and his GPS had lead him to a pitch black cave. “It must be hidden in here” He said to himself. He looked everywhere for something he could use as a light but couldn’dt find anything. So he got to rocks and some stick and tried to light a fire to see through the dark.

Hitting the 2 rocks together he began seeing a spark. “It working” he said very excited. So he continued. The fire was lit and so he got another stick and set the top of it on fire. He enter the cave and saw it the Enactment Rock so he just ran in and grabbed it. Suddenly the cave started shaking. Then the hole cave smash down but luckily the scientist just made it.

As the sun set the scientist called of his transport machine. The transport machine arrived and he went back home. Running towards the lab he saw that his crops were worse than they were before. Once he got there, he quickly finished his special liquid that would help his crops. He rushed outside and poured it all over his crops. Intently it began growing until it was as good as new. “Ya!, it worked it worked” Shouted the scientist with joy.

THE END

Minecraft

This is a movie about the boy who cried wolf

The Boy Who Flew Too High

Once upon a time in a in a large tower there lived a man called Daedalus. He inventor many weapons for the King Minos army. Daedalus had a son called Icarus they wanted to go back home to Athens but King Minos keep Daedalus as a prisoner.

One day Daedalus came up with a plan and he decided to invent something new. He went to  the King and said “may I please have wax and feathers for the new invent I’m working on.” The king decided to give it to him. He got to work and ordered them in four lines, starting from the smalls feather to the larger ones. Then he sicked the feather togeather with the waxs.

When Daedalus was done he showed his son what he had created. With the feathers and wax he made two pairs wings and put one on. He began to flap his arms back and forward back and forward. When suddenly, he was no longer standing on the ground. He was flying! Icarus was amazed.

Over the next few day Daedalus tort his son he to use the other pair of wings. They both preached and preached when finally Icarus learnt how to fly. But he wasn't as good as Daedalus.

The next day Daedalus told his son,“We will fly to Athens, but you must be careful because if you fly too high the sun will melt the waxs that holds your feathers of your wings together and you will fall into the water and sink, but if you fly too low then your wings will fill with moisture and you will sink as well, understood.” “yes father” Icarus answer. Off they went.

Daedalus was leading the way and Icarus was following him. Icarus was scared because he had never flew this far before. But after a while Icarus knew it was a lot of fun. So he swoop down above the sea. Daedalus look back and said to Icarus, “Icarus stop that”. Icarus stopped playing around and got back on track.

Then he felt the wind and he was able to soar through the sky. He was soaring so high, when his dad shouted, “Icarus come down, right now!” Suddenly the wax on Icarus’s wings began to melt. He began to fall. “Help!” Icarus shouted. Sadly Daedalus couldn't caught him as he was falling. Icarus die in the water because he didn’t know how to swim. The End

So the morale of the story is listen to your parents and don’t fly too high.

Earth Ball

Once there was a man named John. He lived in a small house alone. One day, he decided to go on a walk just around the area. He hear a sound. Something was strange about the sound though. The sound leda John to a cave. He walked in. “Hello” John said. “You must be John” a weird man said.

“I am Rohn” Rohn said. “I have been waiting for you, because you can help me destroy the earth ball” Rohn said. John was confused. “What do you mean” John said. “I have had this earth ball for many years and it contains a lot of power” Rohn said. “So why me” John said. “I had a vision that today you will come into my cave” Rohn said. “ How do we destroy’ John said. “We need to drop it into the vocation of lava in lava island.

“ So lets go” John said. “ Wait how do we get to the vocation of lava in lava island?” John asked. “In my jet John said. “Okay now lets go!!!!!!!!!” John said. Off they went to the vocation in lava island . “You jet is amazing” John said as they hopped in and flew to lava island.

“There it is” Rohn said pointing to lava island. Lava island was covered of lava from the hot steaming vocation so the jet turned into a boat and they landed in the sea. Rohn had two jetpacks so they both flew over to the top of vocation.

Looking down John was scared and nerve. Rohn carefully dropped the Earth Ball into the vocation. Suddenly the vocation blowup. So Rohn and John had to get back to the boat jet. So they did but on there way Rohn ran out of batter so his jet stop and he fell into the lava and died. It was just John left and he had to get to the jet boat.

Luckily he made it. So he turn the boat back into a jet and flow back home safely. He lived happily ever after. The End

Cosmo's Kennel

My Puctuation Goals

Cross Country

“It is so HOT!!!!!!!!” I said as I was watching the Cross Country Races. It was finally Cross Country and I was full of energy. But the sad thing was that I am 10 so I had to wait until it was our turn to race and it took for ever because there were 5 year old boys race and 5 year old girls race , 6 year old boys race and 6 year old girls race and it just went on and on. But I managed. I am in Green

“10 year old boys please come to the start line” Someone said. So I stood up and marched away. I was not really neaves which was strange because normally I’m FREAKING OUT and wondering about the things that could go wrong. Mr Brut showed us the cores but I still don’t understand it, so I just pretended that I knew where to go but when it starts I can just follow everyone else.

“On your marks, get set” Mr Burt said and press the button on his talking thing and it made a loud sound which mean GO!!! Everyone was Off like a flash of lightning. I began jogging and noticed that people were sprinting. I knew that if I were to sprint at the beginning I won't have any energy left so I kept jogging.

People started to stop but I kept going. I was in third places and behind me was my friend Nathan. “ Hi Mr Marks” I said. There were teachers and a few students from another school helping us and if it weren't for them then I think I would of been lost so lucky they were there.

I began to get tied. Suddenly a boy called Sateki came out of nowhere and sprints strat pass me. “What the, where did he come from” I said to myself. I looked behind me and saw my other friend. He ran past me like Sateki. But Nathan was still there and I was not going to let some else past me. So I jogged a bit faster.

I saw the finish line and I was puffed out. As we were going thru the gate I slipped but I was not going to let that stop me. So as I got up and blocked the gate so that Nathan can not past me. Well I was blocking the gate my old teacher(Miss King) was also supporting me. I got closer to the finish line and began to sprint. I can 5th place I know I tried my best and had fun and thats what mather.

Little Red Riding Hood

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This is a summarise of the story Little Red Riding Hood and it will teach you the morale.

Once upon a time there lived a little girl called Little Red Riding Hood. She was on her way to her Grandma's house because Grama was ill. On her way she came across a wolf. “ Where are you going?” the wolf asked. “ I am on my way to Grandma's house, she is ill and I baked a Rainbow cake for her” Little Red Riding Hood replied. The wolf had a plan and left. When Little Red Riding Hood got to Grandma's house. She knocked on the door and said “Its me Little Red Riding Hood”. “Come in” Grama awserd. Little Red Riding Hood cut the Rainbow cake and give it to Grama. Suddenly Grama ate Little Red Riding Hood and the cake because she was really the wolf. The end

So the morale of the story was don’t talk to strangers.

If you are walking around in Glen Innes and if you see a stranger you can give him a small hello but you should not tell him what you are doing unless you know him because if you do he might follow you and kidnap you and we don’t want that to happen right. Thanks for reading my story. I hope you learnt to not talk to strangers.

The Three Little Pigs

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This blog post is a summarise of the story The Three Little Pigs and it also has the morel of the story as well. I hope you enjoy it and also leave feedback to help me create my next blog post. Thank You

There live three little pigs and one mother pig. They lift home and begin finding thing to make a cottage. The first pig found a stack of hay and made a quick hay house which was not so smart. The second pig found a pile of sticks so he made a house from stick. But the third pig who was very smart bort some brick. The sunset and the third pig finished his house went a wolf dropped by and went to the house of hay. He blow it down and ate the pig. Then he went to the house of sticks and did the same thing. He went to the brick house and tried to blow it down but it stood firm. He tried to climb into the chimney and dived right into a pot with boiling water. The wolf ran back to the woods never to be seen again.

So the morale of the story was to take your time and you will get good results.

In life you will come across many opsd coles and if you take your time then you will get good results. Like for example if you are told to take care of an apple tree and you water it every day and do all those thing to help it grow then the tree will grow good apples for you to enjoy. But if you don’t take good care of the poor tree, it won't grow and perjus apples. Which choice would you chose, Take care of the apple tree or don’t do anything to help it. I know I would take care of the apple tree. I hope you will take your time with what you do because you will get good results.

The Lion And The Mouse

This week my literacy teacher Mr Marks has been teaching us how to add detail to some of the sentences from the story the lion and the mouse. We are really enjoying it. We also learnt how to tell people that it was day time without saying it was day time. Here are some of the sentences that we have been editing. The red text is what we add.  As the sun was setting the mouse gnawed the rope with his teeth. Here is a link to a short version of the story The Lion And The Mouse.

Goldilock And The Three Bear

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Once upon a time in a large forest near a village there was a big house. In that house lived 3 bears, a big farther bear, a middle sized mother bear and a little baby bear. They all had there own chair, there own bed and there own bowle. Father bear was really respectful and kind to others. Mother bear had lots of friends and visited them in the afternoon but Baby bear was a bully and got into mischief.

One day Mother bear made some  pudding with crushed berry. The pudding was too hot so they had to let it cold down. While they let pudding cold down they went on a walk to visit there old friend, the beaver family because THEY JUST HAD A BABY!!!. A little girl called goldilocks who was Baby bears only friend wanted to see if he was at home so she knocked on the door. The door was open and there was no one home so she snuck in.

She saw the pudding that mother bear mad so she ate Baby bear pudding. Then she went into the living room and saw baby bear's chair. Slowly she sat down. “Boom” the chair broke and goldilocks decide to go up stairs. Up stairs she found 3 beds, a big bed, a middle size bed and a small bed. She laid down on the small bed. 1 minute later she was fast asleep.

“The baby was so small” Baby bear said. Once the 3 bears got home they found that the door was ajar. So they know someone had snuck in. Slowly they walked in. “Someone has ate my puddy” Baby bear cried. So they went into the living room and found that Baby bear's chair was broken. Finally they ran up stairs.

There lying on the bed was goldilocks. “ What are you doing in my bed” Baby bear shouted. Goldilocks woke up and ran down stairs. “Wait I forgive you” called Baby bear. So goldilocks came back they made friends and Baby bear stopped bullying people. They lived happily ever after. The morale of the story is don’t sneak into other people's house unless they let you.