Showing posts with label term 4 2013 writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label term 4 2013 writing. Show all posts

Monday, 8 April 2013

King Jake



Once upon a time there lived a King and Queen. They were having a baby. “Are you ok my darling” the king said to his queen.  “he is dead the baby is dead” they said “ It is ok he is  going to be ok” the king said with tears. Sudley they saw a head. “ No he is not dead” the king said. They named him Jake. Sadly the queen died.

Jake grow each year and each year the king got sicker and sicker.The King decide to teach Jake how to use a sword before he died. So each day he took Jake to  place to learn how to use a sword. Jake was not so good at a using swords but he did not give up. The only thing he was good at was stuffing things up

3 years later the king died and jake found a princess called gloria she had long brown hair. The next day when jake woke up he could not find her. So he got a horse and went to the forest. He looked every were a then finally saw a castle. Gloria  was at the top looking for Jake. “Gloria I am down here. Jake shouted. Then more and more people came. Jake pulled out his sword and tried to use it but he did not rely know how to use it.

He remembered that he was good at messing thing up so he did anything and beat them. He climbed up the castle and bring gloria down. They got married and live happily ever after.
THE END

Tuesday, 12 March 2013

Ipads

Did you know we use Ipads as digital learning devices? In our class we have 3 Ipads.  I love having Ipads it real help my learn because it has apps like show me wich alows me to talk and draw, vimeo wich alows me to upload movie on to the internet, Imovie wich alows me to make movies, audoboo wich alows me to records voiceovers and maths games help me learn math strategy .

Forgiving No Made What And Carry On

This story is about forgiving people and carry on



My name is Captain none toes. I was named after a terrible tragedy in 1961 when I was sailing in the sea I saw a ship heading towards me I decide to sail towards them and take there tregeare.

Me and my crew thought that we could beat them but we were out numbered. It was ninja pirates. The ninja pirates were the strongest, means and uglies pirates in the land. Then they choep our toes off and that is how I got my name. Ever since then whenever I see a ship, I sail away in fear.

I am really poor  the only things that I have is my crew, My ship and my wife named Margarine. All my crew was so hungry that in fact they wanted to eat my bird. “Captain are we almost there?” asked my crew. “ I don't know,” I replied. Me and My crew were looking for land for over 11 years.

“Look up ahead land,” Shouted one of my crew members. We sail toward the land. “Food” We shouted pointing at a little kid. Everyone rushed toward him trying to get the food. “what are you doing” the poor boy said. “that is my go get your own” he said taking his burger bake. The little boy ran home to his mum.

Sadly they saw the ninja pirates we were all scared. “Margarine” I shooted. We all rushed to the ship. “Margarine Margarine are you here.

“ tweet tweet Captain” “hay is that your bird Captain” said his crew member. Then they saw a bird fly up. “Captain tweet tweet Captain  I am over here” call the bird.

“They took her the ninja pirates” he said. “NO!!!!!!” I screamed. “I am going to look for her” I said. “ But it is the ninja pirates” said his crew. “ I do not care”  “We are going to help you look for her” said his crew.

They followed the flag and finally the ninja pirates stopped and turned around we battered to death and won. I ran to look for her but it was too late I found her body in the water. I was so angry that I had to get revenge. I made them safer what she had to safer I made them walk the plank with sharks at the bodem.

“ No Captain forgive them for what they done”said my crew “ But they killed her” I said “ sill, that is what forgives is about no matter what they do still forgive  even if the hurt someone that you loved” said my crew.

I decide to forgive them and I let them go. I missed her so much but I know I had to forget her and carry on with my life and make new members.