It seemed like they were trying to find out some information about me to take it to their secret lera but I did want them to find out anything about me so I kept quiet. Then they got up and left. “quack quack where are you going” I shouted. Rushing to see what they did a creches white leave fale in the right in front of me allowing me to see what they had done it turned out you were just drawing the lake.
I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Class 2 and my teacher is Mrs Lagitupu.
Friday, 8 February 2013
Omau Creek
It seemed like they were trying to find out some information about me to take it to their secret lera but I did want them to find out anything about me so I kept quiet. Then they got up and left. “quack quack where are you going” I shouted. Rushing to see what they did a creches white leave fale in the right in front of me allowing me to see what they had done it turned out you were just drawing the lake.
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I like your story because it is good. I like how you write your story. Next time you can make your story better by writing more.
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