Tuesday 3 September 2013

Rhyming couplets






I came to Earth on my rocket
Well putting a star in my pocket

 I saw a very beautiful parrot
I think it was hungry so I gave it my carrot

 At the shops I saw my dad
I acted happy but I was not glad
Posted by Jordan at 10:25
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2 comments:

  1. nathanial16 September 2013 at 09:37

    Hello jodarn this is nathanial your rhyming couplets is very emotional and it's surprising.

    keep up the amazing work.


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    1. JordanA16 September 2013 at 20:03

      Hi Nathanial

      I'm glad you enjoyed my Rhyming Couplets. You should try some yourself and see if you enjoy it.



      Jordan

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